THE MAN WITH THE GUN EXCLUSIVE @GROOT'S LOOKING FOR YOUR FEEDBACK!

4 months ago

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Hey, what's up stoners! I don't know about you guys and gals, but I'm high as fuck on some peanut butter fudge with 150mg of THC for just $5 bucks apiece, so I had to get 8 of those shit's and an ounce some fire Blueberry Gelato that totally rocks for $140 an ounce! For starters, this self-publishing on Kindle is more complicated than using the editor is on smoke beyond any stoned-doubt in my mind, but I'm determined to publish my first e-Book to the best of my abilities.

I got side-tracked at 5 am this morning when I got baked and Googled "Kindle e-book formatting requirements" as the information was overwhelming and raised many questions that resulted in more research queries from image size requirements to page bleed and trim, the amount of stuff that a stoner has to do to self-publish an e-Book requires the best of weed, total concentration, and a big-ass bottle of Excedrin.

This post isn't about votes as much as it is about looking for real feedback from my most dedicated fans, including @Unnamed because this is my first self-published short story, and it's a big deal to me! I consider my fans here on smoke as my friends, and to @Groot you are, so be honest and please tell me if it rocks or if it totally sucks!

I'm a professional article writer by day with clients such as Wayofleaf.com, HeliconUSA.com, DidCBDWork.com, and TrinitySoftware.com to name a few, but ya know something? I enjoy writing articles for the most part, but I also feel enslaved to them as I'm sure that a lot of other professional writers know exactly what I'm talking about!

But when it comes to writing for my own peace of mind, there's nothing like writing stories that people actually enjoy reading; therefore, I'm going "all-in" on this Kindle short-story adventure! It's the "Universal Writer" or Bust Bitches!

During my research into this endeavor, I also discovered that the Kindle e-Book creator has a minimum of 24 pages, which includes images, so this will be like rewriting an entire smoke.io community adventure in one e-Book. Below is a shared-link for my smoke.io fans to get a preview of what to expect in @Groot's first e-Book.

I have to do it this way because I can't afford to have a duplicate copy on the internet, this is for smoke.io stoners only, so you guys and gals can give me feedback on the first 2 completed pages before I get too involved with this project; therefore, your comments would be greatly appreciated!

I have to admit, it does look a lot different on Google shared-docs then it does on the Kindle creator, but it should give readers here, a basic idea of what to expect! Comments are definitely welcome and please enjoy something you may not have expected from @Groot!

P.S. The Man with the Gun is going to be a never-ending series starting with Volume 1, "To Hell and Back" with smoke.io's very own @Bench as the "Man with the Gun," Captain Bench Stone. Enjoy:D

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dJhA7q3Bo8qNip-LNKfipd_pT80wHEn6b9oCVIZPjnU/edit?usp=sharing



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I will get to it, but it will be tomorrow in my part of the world.

The future that is for you. Not just tomorrow, but tomorrow and half a day in the future. 🤘

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That's fine. LOL Thanks mate:D

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Left few comments. One general reflection, few nitpicking ones.

Captain Bench Stone. Enjoy:D

I do, lets start the ship!

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Thanks, it does sound fun! But Captain Bench Stone needs to prevent it from starting! LOL

Requesting Access 😎

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The link isn't working for you?

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naw it said permission denied

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Working now though

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You're a planet again by the way! LOL

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LOL I accept being new earth 🥰 I can't help feel a little impregnated 🤣🤣🤣

Critical analysis, thinking about what my english teacher taught me though he was an ass... I think some of the "he" usage could be stripped for flow ... we know you are writing about "the man with the gun" thus no need to reiterate it ... what to replace it with creates "dynamic flow" which he said when you understand you undertstand SMH I still fail to explain it and maybe that is why he never bothered.

I love it, as I do all your writings. You asked for honest and IMO that would be the only change I see from perspective of a reader enjoying it with a little of my own experience writing.

I think I might just have to buy a kindle just to have a copy 🤣🤣🤣

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No, that's perfect, it's exactly the kind of feedback I'm looking for!

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Sweet, I sent it to you anyway:D